Rough Cut Feedback

Cammy:

• Cool
• looks good
• but at 1:30, its mainly arm in the shot(address that in editing)
• and that little thunder crackle when the marbles drop doesn't sound too good (audio) 
• and when the marble is held up to the light
  yeah I like that (song at the end and credits)

  
  

  Anna:
  

  Amazing bro!

  Wish mine was as good as this ¬.¬
  
  
  An actual film maker:
  Dog overused.
  Sounds coule be better (effects)